I chose this site because it is popular, easy to use, and its people's honest opinions. I have included a sample review to show everyone what a review looks like on Yelp. As you can see it is easy to look out and the format is great.
Everyone here at FFF Camps would truly enjoy your help in getting us a high rating! Please go to www.yelp.com and search for us and tell us what you think. Give your honest opinion because we here at FFF Camps strive for perfection and complete satisfaction and would be happy to fix any issues you may have.
Good, prompt posting Brandon. You kept it short and simple explaining to us what "yelp" is and how to use it. You jumped a little quickly into it however.
ReplyDeleteThe example you left gives us the viewer a great visual on yelp, and helped assure me that the site is friendly and fun to use. Maybe the part that says "help in getting us a high rating" sounds a little desperate, but you recovered right after it.
I did not see any grammar errors, and everything overall was nice.
28/30 NK